The Free Way

Rolling down the free way
the wind brushed my face through the open windows
eyes looking out
newspapers, sobe bottles, chip bags, coke my feet
I don’t mind
I am all smiles.
Thoughts linger on the road
but the are all swept away by the wind and fade in to the asphalt.
The way to there is full of simple promise
traveling does not demand.
It lays itself flat suggesting the possibilities of the world
and lets me run to meet them

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~ by loosethreadsandwritersblock on December 17, 2008.

One Response to “The Free Way”

  1. I am all smiles.
    change it to IM all smiles maybe. i think it sounds softer

    the opening really pulled me in
    and the end really sealed the deal too
    great job again char

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